Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so as to study what to do in another way.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch in the present day’s re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath. 👇
Be Extra Concise
Topic line: Your prospects are unsure and profitability is in danger
Hello Will,
With a lot content material flooding the market, patrons in your house are struggling to wade via the entire noise. Unsure patrons are unlikely to finish a purchase order in any respect. In actual fact, uncertainty can cut back their probability of creating a serious buy by as much as 160%.
Sellers at best-in-class organizations are actually positioned to assist patrons make sense of this flood of knowledge.
We assist our purchasers make higher use of their content material to create a web based expertise that offers their prospects extra confidence of their shopping for choices. These built-in options then hand the gross sales group what they should lower via the noise your rivals are making in your house.
We’d like to arm you with some new concepts to assist hold you forward of the curve.
Would you want to make use of this hyperlink to pick a time most handy for you? [full booking link]. Should you’d desire to volunteer a time, we’re certain we will make it give you the results you want.
Regards,
Rep
Will’s Rewrite
Topic: Shopify Logistics
Hello Will,
Seems such as you’re utilizing Shopify on your storefront. How’re you liking it?
We’ve discovered that when groups get into e-commerce this could be a great spot to start out. Our clients, like Stairmaster, wanted a web site that might account for actual time logistics.
If that’s one thing you’re trying into, let’s join.
Kristina’s Rewrite
Topic: Subscription Billing
Will,
Observed Lavender has a subscription-based mannequin – thought I’d attain out.
Founders in comparable corporations (like X and Y) threat clients leaping ship to rivals due to an advanced subscription expertise.
^ Our platform simplifies it with a greater recurring billing course of and deep subscription analytics.
Curious in the event you wrestle with the identical – value a chat?
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