Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to be taught what to do in a different way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch at present’s re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath. 👇
Earlier than:
Topic line: We’ve landed extra purchasers. Is Interseller subsequent?
Hello Kristina,
We’ve introduced on a couple of extra purchasers, together with COMPANY. Based mostly on the businesses that now we have signed up, I imagine that this will likely be value your time.
Be at liberty to decide on a gathering time at your comfort.
Trying ahead to listening to from you,
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Will’s Rewrite
Topic line: Channel Studies
Hello Kristina,
I used to be working a couple of aggressive Google searches. Additionally took a take a look at your FB advertisements web page. Appears just like the staff is investing throughout channels.
Given you’re hiring a advertising analyst, is that this as a result of cross channel measurement is consuming time?
Will
Will Allred
Gross sales @ COMPANY
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Kristina’s Rewrite
Topic line: paid campaigns
Kristina,
From my analysis, it doesn’t appear to be Interseller has invested a lot in paid advertising campaigns.
^ Is that this one thing that’s within the works?
COMPANY’s platform helps firms like COMPANY handle paid channel efficiency, advert spend, and advertising knowledge sources in a single place.
Assuming you’re diving extra into paid technique within the upcoming months – value a chat?
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